Final

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IV (Pretty Final)

Thoughts on III

Some of the thoughts I had:
I used the goggles as a device to distance myself, but feedback confirmed my thought that they are not appropriate with all the images in which they can be found. While I do want to distance myself a bit, I was thinking about adding titles in German, which I think would keep the connection to the personal. I would own the story. Story: that is another thought. I am implementing a narrative. Thus there will be a very certain sequence.

Also, I will re shoot the castration images in the new environment, with the old accessories, such as the pages on the wall. The water one I wish to re shoot, so one can see the actual ice cubes, and I am switching out the goggles. The fire one with the goggles will also be re shot, losing the goggles.

III

II

This one is really just a sketch. All the ice melted while I was cleaning up some dropped ice in the kitchen. I just still shot it because I wanted a visual idea. Next shot will be of only the submerged face.

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